My 2014 Writer/Reader Year

2014 was an interesting year. I don’t remember half of it (loooonnggg 7 months story…) But what I do remember, has impacted me greatly, growing me as a person and as a writer.

PERSONAL: In the spring, I went on an impromptu trip (as “keep me awake as I drive” companion) to Michigan with this crazy-amazing woman/mother named, Sarah who I’d kinda just met (she locked me in a hotel room for three days, where I wrote like crazy!!)..and, as they say, the rest is history! I now have a BFF who gets me and has stuck with me on this rollercoaster year! So thankful! Also this year, my SUPER Editor got engaged, and I’m a bridesmaid. Shopping with her for her dress and playing mannequin for my dress, has been so much fun! Looking forward to the wedding in July, 2015.

WRITING: I spent most of this year editing, revising, rewriting, and brainstorming BOUND. I sent out at least 100 queries and several proposals to agents (Status: Professional Waiter). My editor and I worked so hard this year–sweawordst & tears–and I’m proud of what we’ve accomplished…now to find the perfect agent who agrees! :)

In September, I finally joined a critique group. There are 5 of us, and it has been such an encouragement to spend time with these ladies. We’re a great mix of writing talent and knowledge–it’s been so helpful! Can’t wait to see what this year has in store for us! We’ll always have SKYLARK!!

In 2013, my boys started going to a new school, and I have to pick them up every day. This put me in the path of Laurel Pardo–a VERY talented author who writes super-awesome TV scripts (Horror/mystery/paranormal—SOOOO out of my genre of quirky, witty YA fiction). Fast forward….Laurel and I are great friends, and recently partners! As I write this post, I’m in the process of adapting her scripts into a full-length novel! Stay tuned to meet Eli Toler–the cemetery Restorer!! So honored to be a part of this project!

I also worked on my other WIP’s…and got a few new plot ideas…So many ideas….:

  • Taken: “sequel” to BOUND–Main characters: Dillon Xanthis and Marisa Hale (YA Urban Fantasy)
  • Endicott: Main Characters: Endicott Keary (Cinderella’s best friend) Della Bentley (my cinderella), Daved Bentley (Cinderella’s Brother), Prince Cyril, Princess Keturah (YA fantasy/steampunk series)
  • Acacia: Main Characters: Acacia Mitchell, Samara Bethany (YA paranormal Series)
  • New Creation: Main Characters: Cayce Thornton, Marco Brooks (YA Christian Fiction)
  • Lines Crossed: Main Characters: Marianne (TBA), Chris (TBA) (Christian Adult)
  • Flip-Flop Kimmi in Tap Shoes: Main Character: Kimmi Joy Harper (Middle Grade Novel)

EXTRA BLESSINGS: In addition to all the ones above… :) Through Facebook, I connected with SO many amazing people/authors who have blessed my life with advice, books (WINNER OF GIVEAWAYS!!!), friendship, and encouragement in my writing journey. This year, I also got to be a part of several editing/promotion projects! I did several book reviews and 2 YAA! CHAT interviews on my blog–hoping to do more in 2015!

I read and reviewed A Christian Writer’s Guide to The BooK Proposal by Dave Fessenden. My review was published!

Stop! Before you even write one word, read this book! Author Dave Fessenden makes the case that the proposal should come first, and that writing it can actually be enjoyable. Dave’s invaluable wisdom saves countless hours of Googling “How to write the killer book proposal.” It gives writers the how-to and examples they need to catch the editor’s eye and nail down the ever-elusive publishing deal.  –Janelle Leonard, novelist, and blogger at The Writing Life: behind the Scenes with an Author of YA fantasy

Through a dear writer friend, I connected with Oliver Dahl–got to read and help with some edit/thoughts for his novel LIES Lies(My name is in the acknowledgements!!) Check out Oliver’s website: http://www.thedreamersadventures.blogspot.com/

One of my greatest joys, is helping promote and encourage other writers toward their dreams–love seeing them accomplish something that they’ve worked so hard for.

Shout out to: ** Michelle Weidenbenner:   http://randomwritingrants.com/

**Olivia Stocum:  http://www.oliviastocum.com/

READING: I didn’t read as many books as most years, but what I did read this year definitely had an impact on who I am as a person and as a writer. Here is list of my 10 out of 10 coffee cups awards:

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Crash Into You & Red at Night & Dare You To Katie McGarry

Skull Creek Stakeout Eddie Jones     

Out of Easy Ruta Sepetys

bookRS    Splintered A.G Howard

Spies and Prejudice Talia Vance   

 On the Fence Kasie West

The Queen of the Tearling Erika Johansen 

ADULT

This year has been one of the BEST reading years for Adult fiction! I discovered, and fell in love with the:

Brain-tweaker, heat-felt stories: Katherine Reay

https://janelleleonard.wordpress.com/2014/11/08/lizzy-jane/

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Fellow Jane Austen (& Arrow) fanatic: Mary Jane Hathaway

https://janelleleonard.wordpress.com/2014/07/09/yaa-chat-mary-jane-hathaway/

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Swoon-Worthy, quirky, & fun: Nicole Deese

https://janelleleonard.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/interview-with-nicole-deese/

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Also loved this novelization of The YouTube series The Lizzy Bennet Diaries:

The Secret Diary of Lizzy Bennet Bernie Su & Kate Rorick

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NON-FICTION

BookJAHBookKIThe Jane Austen Handbook Margaret Sullivan

A Christian Writers Guide to the Book Proposal Dave Fessenden

How to Adapt Scripts Into Novels Rene Gutteridge & Cherly McKay

RE-READS

Cinder Marissa Meyer, Pride & Prejudice Jane Austen,

Emma Jane Austen,

Harry Potter & The Chamber of Secrets J.K. Rowling

Last but not least . . .

DISTRACTION: I discovered I-should-be-writing-but-I’m-watching-yet-another-episode TV showsarrrow

Arrow (Absolutely love Felicity and her babbling ways!)

 The Flash

Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D

Firefly (WHY did it take me soooo long to watch this???)

Witches of East End

YOUTUBE: The Lizzy Bennet Diaries & Emma Approved

Well, that my year in a nutshell review. Thanks for journeying with me on my blog and my writing life! So appreciate ALL of you!! Here’s to 2015 and all the amazing BOOKS waiting to be read (and written).

Interview with Nicole Deese

I’m so excited to be doing my second YAA! Chat (Review:YA = Young Adult, A = Adult, ! = Excitement, Chat = Interviews, getting behind-the-scenes with other writers) and GIVEAWAY! 

Today, I have the absolute pleasure of introducing Nicole Deese and A Cliché Christmas!

⇐  This is NicNicole new headshotole. Author. Texan. Tim’s Wife. Preston & Lincoln’s Mom. When she isn’t writing, she can be found fantasizing about “reading escapes,” which look a lot like kid-free, laundry-free, and cooking-free vacations. cliche

This is her beautifully-wrapped novel

MY REVIEW: A Cliché Christmas

**Warning: finishing this book will give you an insane desire to listen to Christmas music while you bake cookies…then you’ll want to curl up in a fleece blanket and re-watch all of your favorite Holiday movies…and you won’t be able to wipe the smile off your face!

True to the title, the Christmas & Hallmark-approved clichés fell more abundant than pine needles on a tree skirt. You’ve got the:

Home for the holidays = Small lumberjack town in the hills of Oregon

Successful, career-focused heroine who hates December (Her nickname is “Holiday Goddess.” She writes made-for-TV holiday scripts, making Christmas her forte—she does it 11 months out of the year. December = BEACH not SNOW!)

Hottie from her past whom she can’t stand, but who is desperately in love with her

  Banter-filled, embarrassing reunion involving a damsel needing tire chains and a snow-covered knight in a leather jacket and knit cap

Matchmaking Grandma and her crazy friends

Epic misunderstandings

A mother pushing her to get out of town and make something of herself

Snow storm that causes the Hero and Heroine to be stranded for hours in his truck (thankfully they have a bucket of cookies to eat, and share with the other motorists!)

A hurting “mean girl” who’s begging for the hero’s attention and still terrorizing the heroine with reminders from the past

Tear-your-heart-out little girl who brings them all together through her battle with cancer

A happy, death-free ending with kisses and hope!

cliche3Even though I could guess what came next, it in no way lessened my delight-filled squeals as I un-wrapped every scene. A Cliché Christmas was extremely well-written, amusing and filled with enough banter and SPARK to decorate (and light) said needless-tree. I HIGHLY recommend this book! So much fun–and wonderful, realistic romance *sigh*. I can’t wait to read it again!

Some “Serious” Writer Questions

JK: I love to hear about people’s writing journey. Can you tell us a little about yourself and your background? Road to publication . . . Cliff Note version :)

ND: I wrote my debut novel, All For Anna, while I was down for the count after a surprise surgery in 2012. I honestly didn’t know what would happen with that story–my only goal was simply to finish it. Well, I finished, only that one book turned into a three-book series, The Letting Go series, which I self-published in 2013. I was contacted by a publisher in the spring of 2014 who requested a manuscript—and I just so happened to have one finished and edited—A Cliché Christmas. Originally, I had planned to self-publish A Cliché Christmas, but a tragic event in my immediate family postponed that publication date. I signed with Waterfall Press, an imprint of Amazon Publishing, just two months after I submitted that manuscript. It was published this October and is available online and in Walmart Stores nationwide. My entire publication journey thus far can be summed up with this: cliche2

“There is no such thing as random timing.”

JK: You told me this is your first novel in this genre. What are your other novels about, and what drew you to this genre now?

ND: Well, I write Contemporary Romance, but A Cliché Christmas is more of a Romantic Comedy. It was very refreshing to write something on the lighter side—even though Georgia did have to wade through some emotional turmoil to find the fun in being back home again.

JK: Do you have a special time to write or how is your day structured?

ND: Since my boys (ages 9 and 6) are in school six hours a day, I’m “supposed to” be writing during that time. But unfortunately my brain comes to life around 11 p.m. So that makes the early mornings a bit of a struggle.

JK: Any tips on how to get through the dreaded writer’s block?

ND: Read. Read. Read. I’ve experienced a dry spell in writing several times, and the best cure I’ve found is to pick up a book from an author I love…and READ. Inspiration often follows after a good book.

JK: Did you do anything weird/random while researching this book?

ND: Not really with this book so much. Because I lived in Oregon for the majority of my life, I could easily visualize what the make believe town of Lenox looked and felt like. I did have fun creating my Pinterest board though–Love in Lenox.  http://www.pinterest.com/nicoledeese/love-in-lenox/JL

JK: Which actor/actress would you like to see playing the lead character in A Cliché Christmas?

ND: I’d have to say Jennifer Lawrence. Because, well, I just love her.

JK: Which character in A Cliché Christmas is the most like you?

ND: Georgia. I relate to her a lot actually–her humor and sarcasm are very similar to my everyday world and my daydreaming started at a very young age.

JK: What are you working on at the minute? What’s it about?

ND: I’m working on a series about estranged identical twin sisters—can’t say much about it yet. But yes, there IS romance. Have no fear about that.

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Random CHRISTMASNESS questions

Wrapping paper or gift bags? Gift bags for sure! I’m all about the simple.

When do you put up and take down your Christmas tree? Usually after Thanksgiving—except when we travel home to Oregon for Christmas. Then I just kick back and enjoy my parents’ tree and decorations.

What do you put on top of your tree? Um . . . a star I purchased from Dollar Tree a few years back. Suffice it to say, Mama needs to buy a new one.

Favorite gift received as a child? A life size Barbie Doll. For real, the girl was as tall as me and her hair was longer than mine. And straight. (An anomaly for this curly-headed girl.) I loved her!

Worst Christmas gift you ever received? A pair of singing boxer-briefs. With Santa’s face on the behind. (White Elephant Gift Exchange) (HAHAHA!!)

Best gift you’ve ever given? One year my family had the opportunity to help a teenage girl who was about twenty dollars away from becoming homeless. We bought her clothes, food, and had her over for our family’s Christmas Day festivities. It was an amazing experience. And I’ll never forget it.

Favorite Christmas movie? Christmas Vacation and Elf are always big favorites around here–but my own personal Christmas Eve tradition is to wrap gifts (or drop them in gift bags) while watching Pride and Prejudice (Keira Knightly version). I LOVE LOVE LOVE that movie!

Favorite Christmas song? O Holy Night–or pretty much any Christmas song Pentatonix performs. (AGREED!)

What do you love most about Christmas? The togetherness–family coming home, friends stopping by. I love to share life with people, and the holidays are usually a perfect time to do just that.

What’s your favorite cliché? Kissing in the snow. Always.

 LEARN MORE ABOUT NICOLE DEESE

Website: www.nicoledeese.com
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/nicoledeeseauthor?ref=br_tf

Twitter: @nicoledeese
Pinterest: http://www.pinterest.com/nicoledeese

Goodreads:https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6878628.Nicole_Deese?from_search=true

Amazon Link for A Cliche Christmas: http://www.amazon.com/Clich%C3%A9-Christmas-Nicole-Deese-ebook/dp/B00KQ1LYJE/ref=asap_B00BMRQOD2_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1416491604&sr=1-1

Book Trailer for A Cliche Christmas: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7syoa29m0dQ

**Her debut novel, an Inspirational Contemporary Romance, All for Anna, has hit multiple milestones since its release in January 2013, including a 4.7 star rating on Amazon and more than 120,000 downloads on Kindle. She has since completed the Letting Go series and is over-the-moon excited about her new release, A Cliché Christmas, published by Waterfall Press, an Amazon Publishing imprint. A Cliché Christmas is available at Walmart stores nationwide and on Amazon.com.

GIVEAWAY TIME

Up for grabs: ONE copy of A Cliché Christmas (winner’s choice of format: e-book or paperback)

How to enter: Leave a comment below with your favorite Christmas memory…& your favorite Cliché

WINNER WILL BE ANNOUNCED ON DECEMBER 1, 2014

Good luck! THANK YOU for joining me and Nicole!

“The first man who compared woman to a rose was a poet, the second, an imbecile.”

-Gerard de Nerval (French Poet)

Lizzy & Jane

Be hospitable to one another without complaint. As each one has received a special gift, employ it in serving one another as good stewards of the manifold grace of God.” -1 Peter 4:9-10

Katherine Reay mixed together food and some of my favorite bits of Jane Austen to create an amazing, brain-tweaking FEAST!” –Janelle Leonard

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We have a saying for church events: “It’s not about the food, it’s about the fellowship.” This train of thought chugs all the way through Lizzy & Jane—using food as a conduit to reach people, to understand them on a deeper level, and to open doors to addressing their spiritual needs. After all, food is a commonality between people—everyone needs to eat.

My First Reaction

I was ecstatic when I found out Katherine Reay was releasing her second novel—a story that involved two of my favorite things: Jane Austen and FOOD! I wanted to rush out and buy it right away . . . but here’s why I held back: Katherine’s first book Dear Mr. Knightley blew me away, and I wasn’t sure if Lizzy & Jane could compare. I’m always a bit hesitant to rush into an author’s second novel when I’m still thinking about their first.

(Read my review here: https://janelleleonard.wordpress.com/2014/01/23/jane-austen-inspired-approved/)

Usually, second novp&p bookels never quite seem up to par. It’s similar to how I feel about Pride and Prejudice. I dearly love everything by Jane Austen, but P&P holds such a special place in my heart because it was the first book I ever read by her. None of her other novels have achieved that standard for me.

Well, I finally got my hands on a copy of Lizzy & Jane and Katherine Reay DID NOT let me down! Lizzy & Jane touched me and tweaked my brain just as much as Dear Mr. Knightley. While Dear Mr. Knightley challenged me to think about my worth and where to find my value: Lizzy & Jane challenged me to think about mercy, grace, REALLY listening, forgiveness, and how I’m using the gifts God has given me. I always joke that giving people food is my spiritual gift, but reading this story confirmed that hospitality and serving really is a special gift.

Overview

Lizzy and Jane are estranged, self-centered sisters who haven’t recovered from their mother’s death 13 years ago. Now that Jane has cancer, the sisters are forced to relive their mother’s battle. They’ve become good at running, hiding, and stuffing their true selves behind a mask of having everything together. They’re so used to doing things themselves, that they don’t know what it means to let someone help them.

Elizabeth (who actually hates being called Lizzy) is a NYC chef who has lost her ZING! Her restaurant “Feast,” got its name from her mother’s saying: “The FEAST is ready!” The things Lizzy was most passionate about were connected to her mother. To forget and run away from those memories, unknowingly, she’d built a concrete bunker, thrown in her zing and passion and locked the door.

“If the food is good, there’s no need to talk about the weather.” That was my mantra for years—food as meal and conversation, a total experience. (p.111)

What if, in fact, I really didn’t matter outside my cooking? Each day, I justified my life through purpose. (p. 257)

Her sister, Jane, a wife and a mother of two children, has been diagnosed with cancer. She’s been angry and bitter for so long that she’s pushed everyone away—even her husband, who loves her deeply, spending all his free time gathering information on cancer so he can really be there for Jane.

The story starts with a new chef being called in to help revitalize Feast. Lizzy feels like she’s been pushed out of her chef position, so she decides to leave NY and go to Seattle to stay with Jane for a week—which turns into almost four by the time this story is over. Spending time at chemo sessions with Jane, Lizzy relives her mother’s battle, makes some new friends, and rediscovers Jane Austen, and her first love: food. She also meets Nick, Jane’s coworker, who helps her start to get her “zing” back.

But it’s not until Lizzy stops, forgives, and really listens to those around her, that her passion for cooking—and for life—returns in full force. The sisters’ journey to healing starts with their stomach: Food brings them together, but they realize that it’s not just about the food. They learn to be honest, even about things that have bugged them for the last thirteen years. With everything out on the table, they are finally able to heal.

OH! Banter Love!

While this story is more about two sisters, there is some romance brewing and some great banter.

Nick and Lizzy’s first date (p,124):

I bounced down the stairs and opened the door.

“Wow.” Nick’s face lit up.

I beamed. “Can you do that again?” I shut the door and pulled it right back open.

“Wow.” He laughed.

“Yeah, that still felt good.”

Some Austen Spices

Pride & Prejudice: The obvious thing: their names. Their mother named them after her favorite Austen sisters: Elizabeth and Jane Bennet (Although, in their minds, they were more like Eleanor and Marianne Dashwood). Lots of pride, and living by the thought that “my good opinion once lost is lost forever.” No chance of mercy or forgiveness. No belief that someone could really and truly change their ways. No allowance for mistakes and mess-ups. There is a whole pound of prejudice as well. Lizzy has that NYC attitude, but she’s pleasantly surprised and touched when her assumptions are proved wrong

I’ve been on both sides—afraid of where I am and where I’m going to finally feeling comfortable with the journey.” PREJUDICE about appearance—nurse that seemed rough was protecting, nurse that had the outside—clothes, hair, tattoos—heart sold to God and empathy for her patience because of her personal journey

“Have you through about changing?”

“I have. Life would be easier, but it was that kind of thinking that landed me in rehab in the first place. I’m not staging a coup or protesting the status quo, the government, my sweet folks in Nebraska, or small puppies. I just like it. I love hair so black it turns blue or purple in the light. I love that my arms record the experiences that have formed me. I love that when someone is hurt or aches, my look startles them past their defense mechanisms and they talk to me, listen to me—actually listen to me BECAUSE of this, not despite it.” (Cecilia: p. 199)

Emma: Themes of self-confidence, and an Emma-style journey of being brought from thinking you had everything together, to seeing who you truly are—and ending up stronger than you were at the beginning.

Mansfield Park: Nick portrays “Fanny Price” in this novel–putting others’ needs and preferences before himself. He goes out of his way for everyone, making sure Jane is comfortable, that Lizzy has what she needs, that his son Matt is happy.

“What do you recommend?” The waiter commences to share with them his favorites . . . Lizzy says: “What if you don’t like the other one?”

“Of course I will, and they were his favorites. When someone shares like that with you, you go along.” (P. 125)

Sense & Sensibility: Two sisters, struggling to find common ground, but keeping things from each other because they feel they’re protecting them. And like Eleanor and Marianne, Lizzy and Jane did have a bond, it just needed a little digging, and a large refining fire, to get to the diamond.

Persuasion: The letter. *sigh* Nick writes a letter to Lizzy that is very like the one Captain Wentworth wrote to Anne Elliot “I can listen no longer in silence. I must speak to you by such means as are within my reach . . . A word, a look, will be enough . . .”

Quotes & Lessons learned

Lizzy: “What if it doesn’t work?”

Cecilia: “It will because it’s a way to meet people’s needs, reach them through food—and not just anyone, but people who are vulnerable. It’s a gift and it’s all there—an unmet need, an untapped market in an affluent town.” (p. 133)

Cecilia: “You looked at Tyler and Jane’s totality. You’re creating more than a meal; you’re creating sustenance and meeting needs that are way beyond nutritional.” (p. 139)

Lizzy: “Dream building. I like that. I’m beginning to think that the best dreams need others to help build them.” (p. 204)

Letter to Lizzy from her mom: “You are a servant and a seeker of hearts, love and truth—a true chef. I’ve seen you mix together the very best that sustains us and offer it up with a piece of your soul on the side.” (p. 309)

Lizzy’s roommate: “Don’t go at everything alone just because that’s what you’ve always done. Dare to imagine something new.” (p. 312)

Closing Brain-tweaked Thoughts

Hospitality = “Love of Strangers.” It’s about providing a safe place to share—place for Jesus Christ to be seen. People are ultimately saved through the gospel message. But hospitably often creates natural opportunities for them to often times, see before they hear.

Am I using the gifts God has given me?

This story gets me curious about why people love the food they do. Is there something in their past that makes their food choices more relevant? Am I paying attention and asking them instead of assuming I know their preferences? And like Lizzy, I now find myself searching the novels I’m reading for food references.

THANK YOU Katherine Reay for sharing this journey and for teaching without preaching!

My heart has been truly BLESSED!

The Waiting

HELLO!!!

Yeah….it’s been awhile since I’ve been on here. Sorry, if you’ve been waiting…but you can join my club. ;)

The rest of the 5K editing involves lots of encouragement, pain, and joy. But, persistence finishes the race and the editing. I’m so close to crossing my 5K editing line, at least on this project. It’s been a long but inspiring ride! Thanks for tagging along.

AUTHOR UPDATE: I’m still in the waiting phase, but I’ve been very ACTIVELY waiting. Edits are flying in from my editor, and ideas on how to make my novel even better, are abounding. The waiting can be an exciting time when I stay busy. :) And….good news, I’m now waiting to hear from 2 agents that have shown interest!! So, in honor of this waiting, here’s a song that I’ve been singing. Thank you Jamie Grace for putting words to my situation.

5K Editing: Mile 1 to 1.5

You’ve crossed the starting line. You’re off and running, surrounded by hundreds of runners. It’s a little congested, and you feel like you might trip over someone. But you don’t, and little by little, it thins out. Runners start passing you, and you even pass a few. You round a bend. There’s a clock—you’ve only been running for 2 minutes, and you’re not close to the one mile marker…But you’ve committed to run without stopping until the halfway point. You’ve got this!

Your running buddy starts to pick up speed, moving a few paces in front of you. You know you’re holding her back. You yell for her to just go! She flies ahead and is soon out of sight. You wish she’d stayed with you, but you know that this is her first race and you want her to do the best she can. Besides, you’re both going to reach the finish line—even though it’ll be at different times. You smile and let her go …

**Pauses to sing (Admit it, you can’t read or say that phrase anymore without singing it!)

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You stop singing just as you reach the one mile marker. The time has you grinning. If you can keep that time up for the next 2.1 miles, you’ll beat your time. You go down the hill, remembering it from last year. The halfway mark is coming up.

WATER BREAK! YES!

Mile 1.5! You’ve reached the halfway mark! You stop running to drink your ice cold water—but you’re still walking fast. You finish the water, toss the cup, and then begin running again–setting a pace that you can keep until the finish line!

5K EDITING

Your editor finally read your whole novel. SHE LOVES IT, and can’t stop thinking about it, even days later!! She tells you that the beginning and ending need to be reworked . . . But great news: Your middle doesn’t sag!!

You get to work. It seems to take forever to get the first three chapters just right. You write, rewrite, rearrange, divide, and take out lines that you love (but add some wonderful new ones) . . . You work until you both feel it’s been thinned to “perfection.” Now you’re off! Edits are coming in faster–you happily notice that there aren’t as many edits to be added. You feel great.

A great friend moves ahead in her writing career! She’s publishing–seems to be flying ahead. You cheer her on, telling her to go!! You don’t get mad or jealous, you just keep plugging along with your edits. After all, you’re both going to reach publication—even though it’ll be at different times.

You’re almost to the halfway point of your novel!

CELEBRATION BREAK: You’re amazing editor gets engaged! You’re soooo thrilled for her, but your book gets set aside for awhile. You stop editing so you can hang out, ogle over wedding magazines, try on dresses (her dress and your bridesmaid dress!!) share ideas . . . SMILE . . . SQUEAL . . . DANCE!

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After a time of your “celebrating-detour”, you’re both refreshed and ready to get back to the editing! You can do this!

 

5K Editing: Before the Starting Line

This year (since the last 5K) has been filled with agent hunting, rejection letters, networking (I’ve connected with several amazing authors!) editing, editing, and EDITING–with the exception of November when I wrote 66,000 words for NaNoWriMo. I’ve learned and incorporated several techniques that have greatly improved my writing. I love learning. Love the editing process. Yes, there were days when I wanted to quit, but I kept in mind that all the editing was just taking my WIP from good to GREAT!

I’m going to break up this 5K series a little differently:

Before the Starting Line

Mile 1 to Mile 1.5 (with water break)

Mile 1.5 to 3

Bonus: .1 Miles

Crossing the Finish Line & Beyond

BEFORE THE STARTING LINE

It’s your second 5K. You quickly fill out the paperwork  and send it in. You decide you should actually train more for this one. You get a running buddy who tells you she wants to run in the 5K with you!

The day of the race arrives. You’re excited. You’ve been here before. You know what to expect. You know you can do this…after all you did survive last year! You think about last year’s race, reliving the agony and the feelings of accomplishment. You gear up. Sneakers: Check. Running Uniform: Check. Several water bottles: Check. Check. One Running Buddy: Check…Oh, surprise, her brother wants to run too! You all pile in your van, chatting excitedly, and drive to the race. This is going to be great!

You set goals again:

     1. Don’t be last.

     2. Don’t die, get injured or throw up.

     3. Run more than you did last year.

     4. Beat your time from last year!!

You can’t wait to get started! But . . . It’s taking forever. The race was supposed to start at nine, but it’s already way past that. The megaphone guy hasn’t told you to go to the starting line. WAITING . . ..

WAITING . . . .

WAITING . . .

While you wait, you drink water (which cause you to visit the Port-a-Potty 5 times). You talk a lot because you’re nervous and just want to get going. You join your running group for picture time–Which you confidently and happily walk over and pose for. You’re a real runner, of course you should get your picture taken!

(Can you find me? :) )

And then . . . YEAH! The megaphone guy finally woke up. “All runners to the starting line. Race starts in 5 minutes!”

5K EDITING

Your novel is done! You go back through it with a purple pen and a highlighter. You know your novel–you’ve been here before. It’s fun to relive the story and laugh at lines you totally forgot about. But as you read, you realize you should probably hire an editor to give you “fresh eyes.”

CUTTING IN HERE: I’m sooooo blessed to have 2 amazing editors! LaJoie and my dad…I know what you’re thinking. “Your dad won’t be tough on you! He’ll think every word you wrote is wonderful!” Well, my dad is tough, and I so appreciate it. (My dad is a very talented writer!) He told me that he was scared to read BOUND because he didn’t want to have to tell me to take up knitting. But then he did read it….and was surprised at how much he LOVED it!! It was an interesting journey. Dad read BOUND out loud to me. To hear him read from the POV of a 17-year-old girl: Priceless (And super embarrassing at times…especially the kissing scenes! *BLUSHES) BONUS: having a guy’s perspective on male dialogue is awesome! All my guys sound like guys, thanks to my dad!

You search for the perfect editor. You find one and send her your novel. You start to get nervous. What if she hates it? Days go by . . .

WAITING . . .

WAITING . . .

WAITING . . .

While you wait for her response to your words and answer: You write up a query letter and a proposal and then edit those several times. You read and write. You send out letters to agents…You get rejection letters. You get your professional author photos taken. Because you are a REAL author! (Have to be prepared for when you make it!)

And then . . . The editor sends you a note. She read your whole novel and loves it! She can’t stop thinking about it, even days later. The best news, she agrees to become your editor!

LET THE EDITING PARTY START!!

5K & Writing

So, I ran my second 5K yesterday. Once again, I survived! My time was higher, but I’m proud to say I ran all but 1/4 mile! HUGE improvement on last year.

People have been asking if I’m going to blog about it this year. I think I will, but instead of “running a 5K is like writing,” this year I’m going to do a series on “running a 5K is like editing.”

Stay tuned! And while you wait, check out the series “5K Novel.”

https://janelleleonard.wordpress.com/2013/08/05/5k-novel-the-starting-line/